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Mad As A Hatter

I pull my hat low upon my brow
My hands trembling, convulsing now
I wipe the drool from off my chin
And try to walk upright again
I stumble, screaming out a horrific sound
I have fallen once more to the ground

I cannot stop the shrieking
How many biscuits are there today?
A COPPER A WATCHMAN!
No, no n-n-n-n-no sir, I-I-I-I
Hattah Hattah Hattah Haigha
STOP IT!

It comes from within yet I know not where
I crawl now with frightful despair
I only wish to return home
Saved from the tempers which are my own
And here they come their coat of white
I have no voice to tell my plight

And yet I laugh and mumble so
Ten o-o-o-o-over six NO!
Where did everybody g-g-go?
Mommy never loved me
I want to lay in a flowerpot
OH! the butcher is raining

Now, amid my padded walls
And curdling screams of darkened halls
And arms tied tight around my side
The laughter I cannot subside
The price you pay, or so it seems
For the finest hat in all Bedleem
©2006-2009 ~bigjojo49
:iconbigjojo49:

Author's Comments

This piece was inspired by my Haloween Costume This year
A little backround information on this piece, if you dont understand most of what's going on in this piece, you might want to search Mad As A Hatter and Bedlem (Or Bethlehem Royal Hospital) This poem is set in 1814, the last year Bedlem resided in the buildings in Moorfields. I chose this time because it was near the end of the "show of Bethlehem" which I wanted to have as a visual and moving image in this poem. Once again if you don't know anything about the origins of the phrase mad as a hatter or the history of Bedlem hospital I seriously urge you to look it up, I think you will find it very interesting. (On a side note, for anyone who really really knows their history, they might notice that while the poem is set in 1814, the phrase "Mad as a hatter" is not used in common use in England until around 1837, nevertheless, it was a phrase in its infancy in 1814 making the plight of this man all the more seclusionary) This is a character who I will be doing other poems on. Ive decided to name him Richard Aarman. Oh and btw, for anyone who has a love of literature, they might notice some references to other works within the poem. Leave me a comment, I would love to know what peoplet think of this.

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:iconschlaflose:
Wow! That's wonderfully done! You're a professional at poetry! O_O I can learn a lot from you, my friend! >w<

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Can you smell these two cloths and tell me which one smells more like Chloroform?
:iconmuse21:
It's the mercury that preserves felt. It causes you to become, well...insane. That was also the reson for The Mad Hatter in Alice in Wonderland, am I right? The ending gave me a giggle, I must say.

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“Writing is like prostitution. First you do it for love, and then for a few close friends, and finally for money.”
:iconinkmouth:
Very nicely done...mercury is never a good thing to play with...nor any more use in a hat.

Well done

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They're coming to take me away...haha.....
:iconthenotoriousdek11:
The mercury was a bit like a high at the time, but after a while it left permanent brain damage. People didn't know what that was back then, so they simply called them mad...

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:iconkamalyn:
Wow! That was amazing! I was just doing a search for Mad Hatter (Alice in Wonderland) but found this (probably not intended as AiW) and it is A-MA-ZA-ZING!!!!!

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Hatter/Hare= :heart: ^^
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:iconkamalyn:
Out of curiosity, what does this line mean:
"Hattah Hattah Hattah Haigha"

I mean, what were you intending when you wrote it?

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Hatter/Hare= :heart: ^^
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:icontamakicat:
I think what she/he meant was.... with the Hattah = Hatter, pronounced pretty..commonly if I could say or Brithishly .... and the Haigha could be a form of someone saying things like that just when you...make sounds juste for fun ..or like , a working song... like he's working on a hat and he says the sentence just for sounds.
:iconvioletbeefstick:
im reading "Through the Looking Glass" right now so i enjoyed the hatta haigha bit

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'Real Life doesn't fit in little boxes that were drawn for it.'
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:clap:
I really like how you did youre homework in terms of historical context too; most people dont invest that sort of effort.

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